Lori:(sighs)Fine, you can come and if hes not at the park, Well use the tracker. Lincoln grabs a comic and starts reading but Odine becomes more than that Lincoln is just taking what his sisters are doing to him and she feels that hes not standing up for himself . I'm Late!! Teen And Up Audiences. We cut to Movie theater and We see the Loud sisters in cinema going to their seats and then Luan puts a whoopee cushion in one of the seas and Luan quietly giggles to herself. Odine and sisters run to the edge and they watch as Lincoln hits many rocks until he finally reaches the bottom of this hill. Unlike his female counterpart, his brown hair is cut shorter, and he wears a science lab coat, with green gloves, instead of wearing a green sweater. Murder doesnt get that attention. Lori then looked her counterpart texting on his phone.). Lincoln: Yeah, mom packed extra. The portal closes and the sisters were disappointed.). The Broken House is a The Loud House fan fiction written by Omega Ultra. - Loud House What If? Odine: Lincoln,Were points behind. We cut to bowling alleys arcade and we see Lincoln and Odine playing Muscle Fish: the arcade game. (in head)Ach du lieber, Lincoln was supposed to get a strike, like he said. The fishmans shake their heads. His living room had gotten smaller as all of them slowly grew up. Odine:I told you to stop calling him that! Lynn: (immitating Lincoln) Says the one who wanted to lead us! Lincoln becomes the unconvinced that her invention worked.). Linka: You heard him. Looks like I'm not alone after all. Lincoln:But what are we doing all the way out here? Once they go inside, they meet a girl that looks like Grant by having dark blond hair and two pimples but unlike Grant, her nametag says her name is Grace and she has lipstick on face and two helix piercings in each of her ears.). Loki: Yeah, our mom has her own restaurant, Ritas Table and Our Dad is a dentist. You like seafood? Odine:Yeah, just the two of us. ), (Then moments later, Luna and Luke are seen sitting in metal chairs and looking on their phones.). Leni: It's okay, Maybe Lily's the only baby that doesn't bite. Lori: And then he wore the most ridiculous Ace Savvy costume Ive ever seen. ), Leif: Ha. We cut to all the kids lined up and Lincoln holding his bowling ball and Odine gaze at Lincoln with pure optimism. Lisa: Time passes differently in our dimension. Odine:Great! He immediately became horrified how all of the boys that looked like his sisters.). I loved these comics since I was little. What I am gonna do? *Lana, Lola, Leif, Lexx , Lisa and Levi are seen eating Funnel cakes. Luan: Yeah, It couldn't get any cheddar than this. Lana:You know the rules! Check this. (gets up from table), Luan: Yeah, We will see ya real soon. For his clothing attire, he wears black checkered pants, as well as a blue vest with a purple t-shirt with a skull on it underneath, which is similar to Luna's. It was a drawing of him and Ronnie Anne kissing. (Her sisters stand back as they were told and Lisa aims the watch at the TV.). (clears his throat)Hi I'm Lincoln Loud and these are my sisters, Lori, Leni, Luna, Luan, Lynn, Lucy, Lana, Lola, Lisa, and Lily. Odine runs down the alley to help Lincoln and the Loud sisters stunned by what she said. Hey, Lincoln. Then, he pulls out a bag, and puts most of his things inside, including Bun-Bun, his clothes, and his bed gear. Instead of wearing a dress, he wears a light green silk sweater with a white long-sleeved shirt underneath, and dark blue jeans; instead of wearing sandals, Loni wears light green socks with white spots and brown dress shoes. Odine opens one of her bags and pulls out a jar full of money. We have to get going! Lincoln:Well, whoever this kid is, he or she is gonna be awesome. (turns around) Well, the Many Worlds Theory or Multiverse Theory states that there are many worlds which exist in parallel at the same space and time as our own. Lincoln and Odine go downstairs to the kitchen and they find Lynn Sr. cooking in the kitchen. (The other teens went upstairs, leaving Lincoln, Linka, Lisa, Levi, Lily and Leon downstairs. Lana: Hey, Lincoln. ), (Lincoln and Linka screams in horror and then they heard some loud footsteps. Linka: Well, you got to use those passes for the season, I get use these anytime. (makes a bigger burp), Lynn(Girl): Oh, Ill show you weak! Lincoln: Sorry girls. (Both fancy twins continue drinking their tea. User blog:CircularBoat742/Fanfiction - Comeuppance Consequences | The Almost instantaneously, Lincoln's sisters broke down as well. Loni: Thanks, so where are you working these days? View source. He also doesn't have any eyelashes like his female counterpart. Lincoln: I keep in touch with Ronnie Anne. Even Chandler), Chandler:(mean)(chuckles) (whisper) Oh look it's Lover Boy! Lucy:(stoic voice)Not before Vampire of Melancholia. Lars: Wonderful. (gives him his tet paper). Odine:(in her head)Man, his sisters are coming between us and theyre bullying a perfect Boy like him. The plot is simple: In an alternate Royal Woods, Michigan, the Loud family have a surprisingly. (This portal reminds Lincoln of what he's been through from his dream. Lincoln: Yeah, this doesn't make any sense. The Loud House: Pieces of a Broken Family Chapter 1: Prologue Part 1, a Luna: You two probably have only few things in common, right? Lincoln: (to the audience)For starters, I thought the boys from the other dimension were gonna beat me up and give me swirlies in front of my sisters, but instead when Linka was around she'll tell them to go easy on me. I made some mud pies! With you being a saint in all. Well, for my only sister, she is kind, caring, master of all plans and also makes a great Peanut Butter and Jelly Sandwich. (jumps in excitement) Yes! Lincoln:Man,its just the two of us, playing Video games. Rita: Aww, that sounds nice. (Both scientists pick up their younger siblings and went to upstairs to chat, leaving Lincoln and Linka.). (heads upstairs and tears up)Ich kann nicht glauben, dass es vorbei ist( translate: I can't believe that it's over). We cut to the morning where Odine is in the kitchen, calling someone on the phone. Lexx: I know, right! Odine takes out her phone and a speaker, she connects the phone to the speaker and she plays romantic music. After all the hate and mistreat at Ronnie Anne's Party, The family mistreat him at The Loud House Disrespectful, Irresponsible, Hateful, Hypocritical, Ignorance, Unfair, Selfish Selves, Unpleasent, Nasty, Cruel, And lastly, No Love. Lynn(Boy): I know, right! Authors note:This is a deconstruction fic of the St.Lincoln trope. She has some dolls on her shelf instead of action figures, She has her glass mirror on her clothes drawer with makeup.). Afterwards, Lincoln jumps outside the window, onto a tree, and slides to the ground. Agnes: Okay then.Alright, class. (Both Luan and Lane start laughing and slapping their knees. You look fancy as well. Odine:(sighs)I understand and Im sorry I forced to go on a date with me and(to the sisters) Im sorry I called you guys jerks, youre really not . First born, first serve. (They heard the door open and it shows their parents from Lincoln's dimension. (Lincoln gets out of bed, then gets his clothes on. His hat also appears to have a more rectangular hole, compared to the more round hole on his female counterpart's hat. Agnes: That sounds Intresesting Penelope. ), (Lola pours some tea in Lexxs teacup and they both took sips.). Lucy: No problem,(whispers)and Don't Worry your secret's safe with me. The sisters cheer with excitement and they rush out the door. Lincoln:Yeah but Im sure shell lighten up. What if Lana was in Lynn's role in Space Invader? He tries to kill hims. A Dutch oven! Lisa pulls out her tracker and two blimps pop up. (turns her head back to her head to her siblings)Have you ever heard of the Many Worlds Theory? Linka: Yup, this is our Moms first car and her mom's first car and her mom's first car. Loni: But here, boys get choose to beautiful ladies. When the dust settles, Lincoln is left to find a new path in life, with no old contacts, no trust in his mother, and only less than admirable people to . Lucy puts on an ice pack on his head and then Luan puts a pillow under his head and Lynn puts a blanket over him. (puckers her lips). (blushes) And hes my boyfriend. Say hi to your pets for me. Lynn(Boy): I guess We were having some much fun, We didn't notice. We cut to the kids at the bowling alley, wearing bowling attire. When they got there, Lincoln looked at Linka's room and unlike his room, the walls are full of pink and her bed is made. Lori, can you go pick them up? Odine:Did you really let her do that to you?! Lincoln: No fair ,You cheated! Lori:There you go, Lincoln. That was nothing. Lori:And then Carol said You cant have that skirt with those slippers but then He said, Lucy:(reading a poem)In the darkness of my soul there is a shining light. Lori typed in #GOLFERS!. Lincoln: What? (Lars goes under his bed and pulls out a Prince Pony comic.). He wears a red and white jersey shirt that has the number 0, red and white shorts, and cleats. The Loud Sisters except Lily: I'M A BOY!!! He also isn't wearing a shirt underneath his overalls. Today is the last day of school. Lincoln and Odine turn around and they see Lana. Much to their dismay, Lana and Leif laugh at them. Lisa:(gasp)We both have parallel versions of our best friends! Odine grumbles as she keeps eating. Ill go call him down. After it comes to light that Lincoln's heritage might not be what was thought, it will destroy their family. So cool! Lincoln:Dont worry, Ill give her a bowling ramp, just like I gave one to Lisa. Odine:Dont worry I left a trail so We get lost but the reason Were out here is so (smooth voice)We can be you know alone. Levi: We really do! (pulls out her phone and shows Lincoln a picture of her, Claire and the rest of her friends)Their names are Ruby, Zoe, Lia and Stellan. (gets up from the table), Lynn(Girl): Don't worry, We'll be coming back soon. Auntie B in the loud house! Liam: This summer, I'm going toDairyland. (cracks her knuckles)If thats how you want to play it! Lincoln: Yeah, I know but I dont know why Odine didnt know. Lisa: It has something to do with the watch, does it? (pulls the gum hard but it also starts pulling her hair.)Owowowow! He quickly changed his clothes for school,He quickly brushed He quickly ate breakfast, and cleaned his bed. Ive got friends at work, Miguel and Fiona. Lincoln:(To the viewers)Todays the Student Exchange Program and just like Clyde, Im gonna have new friend from another country staying with me for the two weeks! (run offs). Odine lays down the picnic blanket and then she puts down large glasses and pours sodas in the glasses. This is the same living room We lived in for years! )Its noon and its time to go to Dairyland! They arrive at the restaurant. Odine:NO! Lana:Theres one more park left, Tall Timbers Park. ), Lynn(Boy): (snickers) that was weak! Odine really lights up when she sees Lincoln putting a bimb on Lily and pats her on head, which causes her to giggles. Lincoln:(looks at the picture on her wall)Is that your best friend? (farts with armpit), Lana: Cool, I can do that trick too! Leif: We'd like twenty Big Belchers and Two Baby Belchers, please. Lynn:(snickers)Like I need a "stronger" bowling ball to get a strike. Linka: I had the same dream where I encountered these same girls. We cut to Lincoln and Odine going downstair and they go to the couch. Peanut Butter and Sauerkraut, bleh! (Before any sisters could their chances, Lincoln blocks the portal and this causes the girls glare at Lincoln.). Odine growls in angry and much to her dismay, the only empty seat left is next to Lynn. Some explain that every time discussion is made, the timeline branches off and creates an alternate timeline. Lincoln takes another sandwich and they both continue eating while Odine has her arms crossed. Lincoln: Actually, why dont you join us, Lana? (Luke plays the video on his phone and it shows Luke and a familiar looking boy on stage, rocking out to Miek Swagger). Linka: Yeah, the best pizza in Royal Woods. Zach, Congo is a country, not a dance.Lincoln, your test was excellent. Lori: Yeah,(gets an idea) How about We get some dessert? After a moment of silence, Odine leans in closer to Lincolns eyes. We cut to the siblings having lunch at their lanes tables. Author's note :This is a deconstruction fic of the St.Lincoln trope. Lynn Sr. :Odine, look, I made some famous German dishes to make feel at home. Linka: Yeah! Lincoln:(horrified) Y'know what Ms. Johnson, I think I'm fine. Loni: But Link, you said wanted save those for a special occasion. Do you like video games? (the siblings cease their fighting)Problem Solve! (Luna shivers a bit but She continues dancing with her counterpart. Lincoln:(in his head)Oh man is really happening?! (gives 2 packs). Odine:(whispers)Phew, Now I can be on team with my crush. Her siblings just rolled their eyes but Odine yells at her to stop it. Lincoln jumps in and the argument rages on and They fight in a dust cloud. Lynn(Girl): Thanks, Im number one. Lincoln:Oh, you must be hungry. In my dream, one of the reasons why I wanted to come here was because whenever I suggest Dairyland, you girls never want to go and some of you girls like Dairyland. Linka: Well, since I'm the only girl in this house, I gotta put some rules in place. Lola:Not only were you running in the halls, youre also lying, which is also another violation. Linka: Heck Yeah! We see a montage of Odine trying to spend time with Lincoln. Rita: Okay, Ill pack to you some snacks. I like your Jersey! Odine:(sighs)Guten Morgen, I see you're planning to taking me to the airport. It cuts to a montage of the 22 Loud kids having fun in Dairyland.). (Lori and Loki posed with their golfs and Lori took the picture. Lincoln walked over Linka.). Lincoln and Linka then give Lily and Leon each sundaes). They both eat their sandwiches. The Loud Brother except Leon: I'M A GIRL!!! However, unlike Lily, his hair is shorter and has more teeth. Lola: Yeah, Lincolns right! Lincoln: If you want to rematch in Muscle Fish, let me know. ( He turned around and his eyes widen when He looked straight at an 11 year old girl who looks a lot like Lincoln but unlike her male counterpart, she wears a blouse, (as opposed to a polo shirt) dark blue skirt and has much longer hair with an orange hair clip in the front. (Luke and Sam hold hands and they run towards the audience. Odine sadly parts off, as the siblings look on with sadness. They proceed to start eating the muffins as Lincoln and Linka sit in between them to watch Dream Boat). Dankeschn! (It cuts to the 22 Loud kids, wearing udders, walking out of the amusement and cheering). Lana wraps the bandages around his arms and his ankle, Lola puts band aids on his cheeks, his knees and his forehead. They told us that they'll be back three in the afternoon. Lynn(Boy): I gotta say, that was impressive. Lane: Yeah! Odine goes to a desk next to Lincoln and his friends. (stomach growls) Im hungry. Lars: Yeah, I read this when I need a break from the darkness. Odine:Wow, Lincoln, Muskel fisch and Ace Savvy really work well together. Lincoln: Well, I guess it's just you and me now. Loudcest (The Loud House) - Works | Archive of Our Own Lisa and Levi: Easy on the jelly, crusts cut off, and sliced into isosceles. Odine:Now, I know why you love your sisters! Cut to an exterior shot of the house as time passes and back inside with Lincoln finishing explaining to the parents what happened today. Great. In this alternate reality, the Louds are, for lack of a better word, broken. What's more warm than a Sauna? Lynn(Girl): Awesome! 10, 9, 8, 7, 6, 5, 4, 3, 2, 1! ). Lincoln:Okay, I pick Lana, Lisa, Luna and Lily. Leni: Yeah, I hope you didnt get a conduction. Did you just say "rabbit's foot"? Mrs.Johnson: Rusty, not bad. Lincoln Loud Original Loud Character (s) (The Loud House) Psychological Horror Survival Lovecraftian Lovecraftian Monster (s) Lovecraftian gods Romance Angst Descent into Madness horror and fantasy Alternate Universe Loudcest (The Loud House) Lucycoln - Freeform cosmic horror Rusty:Well, I know its gonna be different for you, dude. However, his hair isn't as long as Lucy's. Loki: (chuckled) How cute. ), (In Leif and Lexx Room, Lola and Lexx are having a tea party with his stuffed animals. Lori: I took Lola to the mall one day and shes grown attached to it. With this watch, we can discover different versions of technology, architecture, (Everyone get up and they become excited about different versions of themselves.). Leon was on top of his brothers. Lynn Sr. :Well not only have you lied, forced Lincoln on a date but throughout this week, youve been trying keep his sisters away from him. Odine:If you want him then come and get him! My gum collectionapple corerabbit's footah, here it is. Lincoln: Well, maybe that's only because you always work out. Once Girl Lynn kicks the soccer ball into Boy Lynn's goal, she shouts in victory. Luan: Well, I hope you won with Betty or else youd be tied! Unlike his female counterpart, his blonde hair isn't styled into pigtails. *Girl Lynn, Boy Lynn, Lana and Leif bumping each other on the bumper cows. In fact Hes done lots of nice and kind things. Where do you think he ran off to? Lincoln and Odine went upstairs and when they get to the hall, Odine looks at the many rooms and then She walks to Lincolns room. (farts for real), Lori: EW! We cut back to Lincoln and Odine dancing and She hears his phone, so she reaches in his pocket, takes it out and sees an image of Lori, so she declines and puts it back in his pocket. After they polish off their sandwiches and they pick their drinks and dink them, they drink up. Odine:(puts her finger on her mouth)Shhh Its Okay, Dont worry, Im here. Lori:(Eyes widen)Really?! Lincoln: Man, Theres like noshin pizza with my sisters and counterparts? Luan:You really spared us the trouble!(laughs). Lincoln:Sorry, My twins locked up for running and lying. Another win for me! Lana:(picking her nose with her left hand)Really? ), (Loki pays the pizza delivery guy and by time Loki closed the door, He was confused.). Luan: Yeah, Me and him are tight as a knot. Then she goes upstairs and goes to Lincolns room. However, there are a few differences, such as it having four more rows of seating and being much longer than its own version.). Lynn:Well, they have been gone for eight, so maybe theyre not at the park, maybe theyre somewhere else. We see two kids arrive at the Loud House and Lincoln calls everyone. Also, his overalls are shorter than Lana's overalls. Odine wants to know if you want to go the park. (grabs Lincoln by arms and drags him away.). The broken loud. - Hunter - Wattpad Broken Chapter 1, a loud house fanfic | FanFiction Rape. Hmmm I know! Liam, Good. Lincoln: Man, that was an awesome day out. (they both armpit fart for the entire table, causing everyone at table to laugh), Loki: Pretty good, but nothing beats the real thing. So with so much distress, and also horror, he decided to give up and keep the note to himself). Stella:Man, Lincoln, We cant believe youre meeting a somebody from country is gonna be staying with you for a two week. (In Luke and Lane's Room, Luan and Lane are watching his blog video where Lane is at the store and he throws a pie at man's face, then the man falls on top of a cake and then he runs away.). (Both Lynns start playing soccer again. Lincoln: No way! He also has two chin hairs. Lynn:How insensitive do you think We are?! But this isnt a direct sequel, this takes place in season 4. Odine: Surprise! Lincoln:Yeah, I want you to stay and I want all of us to get along, right girls? The siblings drive off to the B&B and then We cut to Lincoln and Odine still dancing together. Lexx: The pleasure is always mine, your highness. We cut to Lincolns room and they get ready for bed. Luna is doing the drums while Luke is using a guitar as they jammed their own music.